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does this mean

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the part where you said
'i love you'
should be taken out
of the
manuscript
because it feels
like a poor
representation
of what actually
happens between
us.

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he said
its in the watersed
i said
what did you say
he said
the watershed
i said
okay
but the fence is
fallen down

---

he comes to
the beach
looking for
love
looking at
her
looking at
me
looking at

---

one
i had
and
one
i dreamed

both
are gone

---

thats a young looking mom
he said
and she heard him and
she said youre an old looking asshole

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so there was this woman who walked on the beach every day. and every day she wore the same shorts so he would recognize her.
she always looked away and he never said a word. so years passed like this. and they got old.
and one night she said how come you never talk to me when we're at the beach?
and he said because i feel like
ive said it all
and i dont
want to talk
anymore.

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he used to kiss her
they would listen to that song
you know the one
and she would kiss him too
but then he broke her
they were broken
and they listened to that song
you know the one
they listened to it seperately
and everytime they heard it
they
thought of eachother
and.
how.
things.
were.

how they were/
that one time
/stop.

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this is a hidden track -
it runs backwards <
you have to play it slowly _
and in reverse\ to understand.
how much/
i want them to know i love you.
/stop.

---

dont
one night stand
me.
weve known
eachother
too long
and
too well
for that.

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i love the way
you start sentences
___________
i love how you ask me
___________
i love it how you dont
___________
and i love what a
___________
___________
dream
you are.

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8) _ _ _ _ _ _ _
nine. does this mean something to you\
?
poems
i went to the beach today
and i listened
and watched
thnigs
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xXdr0psXx's avatar
this is
just the best love poem,
and the best thing about it
is that it's like every love
every where,
a million in one ?